As we already stepped into 21st century the era of technology. There are tremendous enhansement in every field by the inventors.Thus the society has expecting luxurious as well as safe life from this century. I concern that, this century must have is prespective towards transportation, pollution control and population control.
First of all,fast transportation facilities which cheaper rate must be developed.For example, the space x claim to implement a transporting facility with an average speed of 720 mph name "Hyperloop" by the year 2030. With such a rapid speed distance will become just a number and travelling will be convenient. A research says that average human waste 32% of life in travelling. Improvement in transport facilities and project life Hyperloop helps people to spare times to their loving ones.
Secondly, Environment Research Organisation prophecy that pollution will become reason behind world's end. Pollution control programme must be launched to save our future. For example, Germany had emphasized to used public transport to rome around. This result in 36% decreased air pollution in Germany in last 10 years. They are planning to control 80%-90% of greenhouse gases in next 20 years.To save next generation such actions must have been taken by every country.
Last but not the least, increasing growth rate of world population is non acceptable problem of this century. The storage of resource will not fulfill everyone's need if the growth rate is not control. Best example of country who has controlled its population is China. According to the Worldometers, yearly percentage change in china has reduced to 0.39% from 0.54% in last 5 year and probably will go to -0.43% in 2050.
The 21st century coincides myraid changes among which, improvement in transportation facilities will give a revolutionary face to the century. Beside this,its the time to have our prepestives towards environment.To conclude, the new era must not only have development in transportation facilities but also control population and pollution to give us better luxurious and safe life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 3.97073170732 579% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 965.302439024 185% => OK
No of words: 330.0 196.424390244 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42424242424 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14950985153 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 106.607317073 185% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59696969697 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 283.868780488 192% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8598898452 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4444444444 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 1.69756097561 1296% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138137417191 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455608418885 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463046622808 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820111621122 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462180042895 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 40.7170731707 223% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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