The bar chart bellow shows the perecntage of australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the age groups of physical activity from men and women australian in 2010. It is measured in percentage. Overall, it can be seen that, despite age of men in 15 to 24 had greatest percentage from other groups by men, whereas women has biggest percentage of age groups in 45 to 54.
Turning first in 15 to 24. Men had the highest australian of physical activity at 52.8%, whereas women has lowest rate at 47.7%. however, over the following in 25 to 34 age groups, there was a sharp fall to 42.2% by men, on the other hand women increased gradually to 48.9%. next in 35 to 44, the number groups of women which grew rapidly at 52.5%. at the some time percentage of men suffered at dramatic decline to 39.5%.
Afterwards, in 45 to 54 age groups men and women go through increased significantly to 43.1% and 53.3%. after that in 55 to 64, women has experienced slighty fall to 53% and men growth gradually to 45.1%. at the end of the age groups period, both of them have a closer look at the men by 46.7% and women by 47.1%.
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...15 to 24. Men had the highest australian of physical activity at 52.8%, whereas w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33673469388 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45327005122 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6877412268 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2727272727 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238273488407 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103068310551 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106771131308 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182294537373 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651303767788 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.