The bar chart illustrates the percentage rate of Australia for two distinct gender that belongs to distinguish age group and doing regular physical activity in year 2010.
Overall, the percentage rate of females physical activities for different age groups are more compare than male physical activity, Though rate of mens regular exercise is lower but for young age males physical activity is more than female activity.
Looking into the detail,the contribution of females in physical activity is much more than male physical activity for various age groups, but for age group 15 to 24 the rate of females is less than male activity. While it shows higher percentage for other age groups for 25 to 34 is 48.9%, 35 to 44 is 52.5%, 45 to 54 is 53.3%, 55 to 64 is 53% and 65 and over is 47.1% over the end of the year.
On the other hand, the participation rate of male in various activities for different age group is lower till end of the year, expect age group of 15 to 24 that higher than female activity. From the age 25 to 65 and over the percentage rate is lower than female, that is 42.2%, 39.5%,,43.1% and 46.7 respectively.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 67
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- Scientist have been warning for many years that to protect our environment, we have to limit use of energy in our daily lives, despite warning many people do not pay attention to this. What are the reasons and how people can encourage to save environment? 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'gender' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'genders'.
Suggestion: genders
...tage rate of Australia for two distinct gender that belongs to distinguish age group a...
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Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ale activity. Looking into the detail,the contribution of females in physical act...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
... lower than female, that is 42.2%, 39.5%,,43.1% and 46.7 respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64851485149 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6051130604 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450495049505 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.2335658232 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.5 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6666666667 22.9334400587 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294341750423 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175336652909 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887991146655 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225527517894 0.15604864568 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681862937863 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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