People are always concern about their children education. And many of them think that,reading books for entertainment means waste of time and they also said,that they have to study only academic books.
Firstly, various people have a thought that,by reading comic books or novel children wasted there precious time. because by reading these kind of books they can loose their concentration towards there studies for illustration,by reading entertainment books they ignoring their educational subject,that make them careless for their career. And after sometimes they start spending more time on entertainment books instead of their academic books or subject so,according to people it is important for children to spent more time on educational books.
On the other hand,they suggest that student should learn only sober and educational textbook that provide or give them knowledge for instance,by reading serious books they gain or get knowledge and experience that make them intelligent and smart and also help them to achieve success in life.
In my opinion, sometime it is vital for children to read some books apart from their course that help them to fresh there mind.
In conclusion, by studying only educational books or novel it help children to expand their knowledge and become more focused about their study.
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What is positive and negative sentence?????
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You got those error messages because the sentences are too long, for example:
'On the other hand,they suggest that student should learn only sober and educational textbook that provide or give them knowledge for instance,by reading serious books they gain or get knowledge and experience that make them intelligent and smart and also help them to achieve success in life.'
it is one sentence for one paragraph.
Always put a space after punctuation marks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , reading
...n education. And many of them think that,reading books for entertainment means waste of ...
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Suggestion: , that
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Suggestion: Because
...el children wasted there precious time. because by reading these kind of books they can...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...there precious time. because by reading these kind of books they can loose their concentra...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...by reading these kind of books they can loose their concentration towards there studi...
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Suggestion: , by
...n towards there studies for illustration,by reading entertainment books they ignori...
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Suggestion: , that
... they ignoring their educational subject,that make them careless for their career. An...
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Suggestion: , according
...ad of their academic books or subject so,according to people it is important for children ...
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Suggestion: , they
... educational books. On the other hand,they suggest that student should learn only ...
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Suggestion: , by
...vide or give them knowledge for instance,by reading serious books they gain or get ...
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Line 9, column 63, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ying only educational books or novel it help children to expand their knowledge and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4347826087 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71829185293 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545893719807 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2838364989 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.625 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.509641495668 0.244688304435 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.237922823889 0.084324248473 282% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722540534487 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289194882725 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980698612888 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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