The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart shows the proportion of Australian men and women in different age groups who played sports regularly in 2010. Overall, it is obvious that the percentage of women doing activities was always larger than that of men in any age group except the one from 15 to 24.
Starting with the people of 35 to 44 years of age, the most significant difference can be seen, and 52.5% women but 39.5% men did exercise regularly. It was followed by that in the age group of 45 to 54(53.3% versus 43.1%), of 55 to 64 (53% against 45.1%) and of 25 to 34 (48.9% and 42.2%). However, it can be seen in the proportion of old people(65 and over) that the gap was the least obvious, and the figures for both genders were nearly the same, 47.1% for women and 46.7% for men.
Turning now to the group of 15 to 24, however, there were more boys than girls. Compared with 47.7% women, 52.8% men played sports very often.
It is noticeable that the men of 15 to 24 were most willing to play sports among the same gender, at 52.8%, while the women of 35 to 44, 45 to 54 and 55to 64 preferred to do so, at about 53%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16981132075 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17435946629 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575471698113 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8976081353 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322669002711 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155312616083 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179174644312 0.0843802449381 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201119497127 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.193391477001 0.0819641961636 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.39 61.2550243902 143% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 11.4140731707 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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