The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the information about proportion of various age periods of males and females who doing daily outdoor activities in Australia during 2010. Units are measured in percentage.
In overall, it can be seen from the information that the highest percentage of men who did regular physical exercise related to first age group and least amount from adults. However, majority of women doing regular physical activities from fourth and fifth age periods and minimum in middle group.
With regards, the daily outdoor activities become more popular among Australian youngsters males accounted at over a half ( 52.8% ) where young one females only at below a half ( 47.7% ) in 2010. In contrast, a steady dropped can be observed in proportion of men who from Australia between two age groups ( 25 to 34 and 35 to 44 ) was 42.2% and 39.5% respectively, whilst a slight increase can be noticed in Australian women between 52.5% and 48.9% in same two age periods from 2010.
The chart further proves that an amount of senior citizens ( 65 and over ) of both genders who interested to doing daily physical exercise remained relatively similar at around 47% in particular nation between 2010. Likewise, a difference of 2% can be accounted in Australian males who related to two age periods ( 45 to 54 and 55 to 64 ) doing regular outdoor activities at 45.1% and 43.1 in 2010. Lastly, percentage of females who from remained twice age groups were found higher at over a half ( 53.3% and 53% ) interested to doing daily physical activities between 2010 in specific region.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, likewise, in contrast, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 261.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97318007663 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63269973251 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513409961686 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 283.868780488 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2024190921 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.222222222 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289866017975 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127744747481 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595425208116 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187495379382 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453464037392 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.