The bar chart compares the proportion of male and female of various age did regular exercise in Australia in 2010.
Overall, doing exercise became more popular among women than men. It is noted that boys aged 15 to 24 and women aged 45 go 54 accounted for the highest percentage of people doing regular physical activity.
In 35-64-year-old, the percentage of women who engaged exercise regularly gained more 50% meanwhile that of men was much lower, ranging from 39.5 % to 45,1 %. The 15 to 25 age group was the only group in which the proportion of males taking regular exercise was about 5% higher than that of females.
Female who were 25 to 34, participating regular exercise had 48,9% whereas the figure for opposite sex in the same group was only 42,2%. Men and women at the age 65 and over followed a similar percentage, at around 47%.
- The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013. 62
- The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013. 61
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 56
- The chart below shows the total number of minutes in billion of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories from 1995 2002 50
- The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76351351351 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55054678234 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5342379528 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319955723243 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142822507939 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578023630334 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196313758516 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397305622289 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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