The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The provided bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australian males and females in different age groups who did physical activity on a regular basis in the year 2010.
Overall, a quick look at the graph reveals that the rate of females in the 45 to 54 age group was the highest, whereas males aged 25 to 34 did the least physical activity.
The figure for Australian men in the 15 to 24 age group (52,8%) was higher than that of the 25 to 34 and 35 to 44 age groups, at approximately 42% and 39,5%, respectively. The females in the 15 to 24 age group were less physically active than males of that group, just at 47,7%. On the contrary, the figure for females aged 25 to 44 was about 6% higher compared to the figure for males of the same age group. Between the ages of 35 and 44, the rate of females who did regular physical activity in 2010 was about 52%, which was much higher than that of males, at under 40%.
More than a half of women in the 45 to 54 age group were doing exercises on a daily basis in 2010, while just 43.1% of males in that group did. Men aged 55 to 64 were more physically active than that of 45 to 55 age group, at 53% and just over 45%, respectively. Subsequently, the proportion of males and females in the 65 and over age group were almost identical, at around 47%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, whereas, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.212 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38406711315 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.416 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 24.4999370118 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355555116637 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186843490567 0.103423049105 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120250761293 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272365424147 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138379865638 0.0819641961636 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 11.4140731707 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.