Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Currently, it is widely acknowledged that many criminals tend to reoffend after serving the first punishment. In this essay, some main causes will be discussed, as well as some proposed solutions.
The first, and perhaps most significant cause of the trend that most first-time offenders commit more crimes again is a criminal record makes finding a job more difficult. Indeed, there are many companies that do not employ those who have criminals. As a result, the offenders who have been released would not earn enough money to make ends meet and they are likely to choose to offend again. Another prime culprit is the lack of rehabilitation during the imprisonment period. An example of this is prisoners just have to do some basic tasks such as planting trees, doing exercises and so on, and there is no hard punishment for them whilst in prison. If offenders are not trained about moral behaviors and obligations, and the punishment is not deterrent enough, then they will commit more crimes after being released from prison.
Despite the aforementioned problems being serious, they are not insurmountable. One solution which may have a beneficial effect is that the government could introduce a law that employees who have criminal records are acceptable in some positions in a company. Beside that, prisoners should be given a chance to learn new skills which are useful for their future. Some academic courses such as finance, marketing should be opened in the prison in order to ensure that offenders could find a job after imprisonment. Another plausible solution would be to have heavier penalties for those who offend. Apart from imprisonment, offenders should be fined a large amount of money for their crime. If these remedies could be applied, the crime rate after serving the first punishment may be decreased noticeably.
As can be seen above, it is clear that the problems are serious, but there are some compelling solutions which could potentially address the issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, then, well, apart from, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11963190184 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74071987078 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561349693252 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1763486173 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.3125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28840626395 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914263185746 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651758853817 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165603465496 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467726107425 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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