Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is widely acknowledged that it is good to share as much information as probable in scientific research, business, and the academic world, while others believe that some information is too crucial or too valuable to be shared freely. In this essay, 2 sides of this issue will be analyzed and my personal point of view will be given.
On the one hand, one of the reasons why sharing much as possible information is significant is that the science, business, and the academic world would be more developed if more valuable information could be shared freely. Indeed, in these days and ages, there are many excellent scientists who want to devote to the world but do not have enough money to buy the available information. Moreover, the economy of a developing nation can be raised noticeably if other developed countries share their secret to be prosperous. For example, human is a deciding factor of the maturing of Japan and Japanese authority is likely to stimulate other countries to learn from that.
On the other hand, the research process to have valuable information is very difficult. For instance, Marie Curry had to spend many years to discover and publish a new chemical element, so she deserved to be rewarded with a large amount of money. Not only in the science field, but other fields such as economy, academy are also competitive. Therefore, such vital and significant information should be charged or being kept secret.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with those who believe that all of the useful information should be shared freely and widely as much as possible. Besides those analyzed reasons, I believe that the future generation will benefit a lot from it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94014084507 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7416963597 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1792803553 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.916666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409034282284 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134996513344 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157558306907 0.0667982634062 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244684274575 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128153532059 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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