The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar graph illustrates the proportion of male and female Australian in six different age groups who took part in outdoor activity regularly in the year 2010.
In general, it is clear that the percentage of men participated in physical activity was higher than that in women in the most of age groups.
Australian women, the proportion of women did regular outdoor activity was the lowest in the age group 35 to 44 with 39.5%, however, women who fell into the 15 to 24 age group saw a highest proportion at 52.8%. In terms of male people, men aged 45 to 54 engage in physical activity the most with 53.3% and the lowest proportion was men aged 65 and over with 47.1%.
The percentage of men in the age group 25 to 64 was higher than that in women in the same age group, average 51% versus 43.5%. In contrast, in the age group 15 to 24, the proportion of men was surpassed by women, 47.7% in the comparison with 32.8%. 65 and over group, the percentage of women was slightly lower than men, 46.7% compared to 47.1%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ho fell into the 15 to 24 age group saw a highest proportion at 52.8%. In terms o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43915343915 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44434137074 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470899470899 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.9819880261 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320815941477 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176663864784 0.103423049105 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435300468392 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217208793388 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214629742023 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.