The bar chart below shows the percentage of population playing ten top sports in Canada in 1998 and 2005.
The bar chart compares the proportion of the Canadian who took part in ten most popular sports in two separate years 1998 and 2005.
It is clear from the given chart that golf was by far the most attractive sport. The most significant change was seen in baseball after 7 years period, while others saw a minor ones.
In 1998, nearly 22 per cent of Cacada residents chose to play golf, which was considerably higher than the rest sports, followed by a slight rise to 23 per cent in 2005. This upward trend also saw in cycling and soccer, which players increased to 6 per cent and 10 per cent, respectively in the final year surveyed.
Baseball witnessed the largest gap between two years in terms of people joining this sport, which approximately a half of those players fell after 7 years. Ice hockey, similarly, although attracted almost 18 per cent population in 1998, saw a downward tendency to around 17 per cent in 2005. The percentage of those people were involved in the rest of top ten sports also reduced by about a mere 2 per cent after 7 years period surveyed, namely tennis, downhill skiing, volleyball, basketball, and swimming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... compares the proportion of the Canadian who took part in ten most popular sports...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
... years period, while others saw a minor ones. In 1998, nearly 22 per cent of Caca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7263681592 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5222065151 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616915422886 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5810834477 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191843336592 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866745077327 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776509987625 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127818355072 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082459008317 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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