The bar chart below shows the results of survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on 2 groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance.
The giver horizontal bar chart reveals the information about the 10 factors affecting the work performance of employees of two age groups: 18-30 and 45-60 which has been conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The data is calibrated in per centum.
It can be seen that team spirit as well as work environment equally effects the performance of employees of both age group 18-30 and 45-60. Which is 60 percentage. Apart from this, Not only chance for personal development but also in relaxed working environment have affected performance of employees of age group 18-30 in comparison of age group 45-60 by 50%. Moreover, three factors: job security, competent boss and money affects the performance by 20%, 50% and 70% respectively.
Moving further, neither respect from colleagues nor competent have effected the work performance of employees of age group 18-30 in comparison to employees of age group 45-60.
In addition to this, promotion prospect affects the work performance of 90% people of age group 18-30, and 50% of people of age group 45-60. Furthermore, performance of people of age group 45-60 are being effected by 3 factors: job satisfaction, relaxed working environment and chance for personal development by 50%, 30% and 40% respectively.
Overall it is evident that people of age group 18-30 are more effected by the factors in comparison of people of age group 45-60.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...yees of both age group 18-30 and 45-60. Which is 60 percentage. Apart from this, Not ...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elaxed working environment have affected performance of employees of age group 18...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...spect from colleagues nor competent have effected the work performance of employ...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t have effected the work performance of employees of age group 18-30 in comparis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, so, well, apart from, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 3.97073170732 428% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1615720524 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9365115777 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480349344978 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6066034308 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.2 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 5.23603664747 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337280461967 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164021364996 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105399847181 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240925545273 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359743461578 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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