The bar chart below shows the results of suvey conducted by a personal department at a major company.The survey was carried out on 2 groups of workers. Those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60 and shows fectors affecting their work performance?
The two given graphs present information about the ownership of personal computers as a percentage of the population between the years 2002 and 2010.
The first graph shows that the ownership of personal computers have constantely increased between these 8 years. Moving from around 55%, to over a 70%. this results in an average increase of around 2 percentage points per year.
The second graphs offers insights about the pc ownership by educational level. Here we can see that the group with the highest pc ownership are people with postraduate diplomas. In fact, we see that there is a higher tendency to own a computer in more educated people.
Despite this tendency, the group with the highest relative increase in computer ownership are those with no highschool diplomas. this is because their initial ownership rates were much lower than all the other groups.
In summary, the graphs show us that computer ownership increased every year between 2002 and 2010. And this increase was mainly pushed by those with lower educational achievements.
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| 2018-06-28 | Raman Preet kaur | 78 | view |
| 2018-06-28 | Raman Preet kaur | 78 | view |
| 2018-06-26 | Manpreetgill | 73 | view |
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- Should governments make decisions about people’s lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions? 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: This
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Message: You should probably use 'offer'.
Suggestion: offer
...points per year. The second graphs offers insights about the pc ownership by educ...
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Suggestion: This
... are those with no highschool diplomas. this is because their initial ownership rate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, in fact, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25730994152 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63540981723 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590643274854 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8158050084 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7272727273 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0828143677439 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035741324176 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026633165436 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515153279859 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302428059428 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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