The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the production and consumption level of electricity of the top ten countries in 2014. Unit is measured in billion kWh.
It is apparent that China and the United States both produced and consumed a much greater significant amount of electricity than other countries. On the other hand, Germany was the only country in which consumption level exceeded production output.
China is ranked the first in both production and consumption level with a staggering number of over 5000, followed by the United States, which was 1,000 less of than that of China. In comparison, other countries were less than one-fifth of China, with the highest at around 1,000 by Russia and lowest at 480 by Korea.
Meanwhile, the level of supply exceeded the demand for electricity for all countries except Germany, which production fell short of about 55. Among the two highest-ranking countries, the consumption and production level nearly break-even with China at a difference of 70. Similarly, the United States showed a slightly greater variance of around 150 billion more electricity was produced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
... countries in 2014. Unit is measured in billion kWh. It is apparent that China and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, similarly, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29943502825 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88812763586 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8567765544 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204971877213 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113240083012 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122488295413 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15827334789 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106791652067 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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