The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart ranks the top ten countries in the world responsible for the generation and usage of electricity in the year 2014, in the descending order. Unit is in billion kWh.

Overall, China had the highest demand for electricity in the given period with the United States occupying the second position. At the same time, Korean Republic produced and consumed the least amount of electricity. It is also seen that all countries had generated more electricity than they consumed except Germany where the opposite was true.

The cumulative amount of electricity produced and consumed by both China and the US was roughly twice the amount of all the other countries combined. 5,398 billion kWh of electricity was produced and 5,322billion kWh was used by China as opposed to Korean republic who produced 485.1 billion KWh and used only 449.5 billion kWh.

In case of Germany, it produced only 526.6 billion kWh but consumed 582.5 billion kWh of electricity in 2014.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a billion
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...n KWh and used only 449.5 billion kWh. In case of Germany, it produced only 526...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05590062112 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63863330352 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540372670807 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0282123779 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.666666667 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184648669157 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112917062482 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135951430298 0.0843802449381 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147472197915 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128096856912 0.0819641961636 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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