The bar chart provides information on the percentage of challenging situations people immigrate. The data is classified different age groups range from 18-34 to 55 over.
First of all, while the youngest age group and people aged 35 to 54 who have financial problems have nearly the same percentage at around under 35 %, the elderly people are significantly lower than other, by almost 30 percent.
However, the least proportion of health care belongs to the youngest population which is %5 less than older inhabitants. Similarly, the middle age group face with more medical trouble than other given integration problems, with little over 35%.
On the other hand, nearly 18 % of people aged 35 to 54 find educational settlements for their children which is almost four times as many as the percentage of people who are in their twenties.
Overall, it is clearly observed that the least ratio accounts for educational matters in all presented age groups although people aged 35 to 54 have greater than others. As opposed to individuals in the 35 to 54 age group confront with economic problems nearly as much as those of health care.
The bar chart provides information on the percentage of challenging situations people immigrate. The data is classified different age groups range from 18-34 to 55 over.
First of all, while the youngest age group and people aged 35 to 54 who have financial problems have nearly the same percentage at around under 35 %, the elderly people are significantly lower than other, by almost 30 percent.
However, the least proportion of health care belongs to the youngest population which is %5 less than older inhabitants. Similarly, the middle age group face with more medical trouble than other given integration problems, with little over 35%.
On the other hand, nearly 18 % of people aged 35 to 54 find educational settlements for their children which is almost four times as many as the percentage of people who are in their twenties.
Overall, it is clearly observed that the least ratio accounts for educational matters in all presented age groups although people aged 35 to 54 have greater than others. As opposed to individuals in the 35 to 54 age group confront with economic problems nearly as much as those of health care.
- The figure shows demographic trends in Scotland 11
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- The two maps provide information on how Frenton developed between 1990 and 2012 67
- Nowadays it is not opted for a healthy lifestyle by the young population However some people think that not only their schools but also families have a duty to change this circumstance I totally agree with the idea of both components having responsibiliti 61
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...aged 35 to 54 have greater than others. As opposed to individuals in the 35 to 54 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, similarly, while, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70493722624 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0609964004 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.600841947198 0.215688989381 279% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.264977883832 0.103423049105 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154053336132 0.0843802449381 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.35305017892 0.15604864568 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.198000139769 0.0819641961636 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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