The two maps provide information on how Frenton developed between 1990 and 2012
The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 to 2012
The two maps provide information on how Frenton developed between 1990 and 2012.
To begin with 1990, there were mainly four constructions located to on the right side of the High Street. While a green area (was) used as a cafe and park and a theatre were just behind of the High Street, a residential area to the south of the park and shops which was were opposite the houses to the south was built on the south-east side of the Frenton. When it comes to the other side of the street, it is clearly seen that the four major establishments which were a school, a bank, a library and a hospital had been developed in the west of the High Street. Also, the unoccupied places had been filled with trees on both the south and north side of the town.
On the other hand, there had been a considerable amount of tree loss in Franton over the years. On the north side of the map the blocks of flats were constructed and on the south-west of the map , technopark was built instead of trees. The bank to the south of the school was also changed to a restaurant, and the hospital was expanded to the south. Furthermore, whereas, on the High Street's right side, the place used for recreational activities was converted to a hotel and a golf course, houses and the theatre were replaced with blocks of flats and the cinema, respectively. Lastly, On the north side of the town new flats was were built and a supermarket replaced shops.
Overall, There have been significant changes in housing and facilities over the period given. All houses were converted into flats. It seems that there has emerged a need for shelter for the population of Frenton within 22 years. ÖZGE
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, lastly, so, whereas, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.0 300% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 965.302439024 147% => OK
No of words: 312.0 196.424390244 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54487179487 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49870895223 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 283.868780488 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1225785123 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202608332253 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818616001986 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.216641517563 0.0843802449381 257% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292393936468 0.15604864568 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.375847814795 0.0819641961636 459% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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