The pie charts provide information on the proportion of students in each faculty at North West University and the number of non-US students opting for arts subject.
Overall, it is clearly observed that whereas the vast majority of students studying arts are South American, the fewest number of people accounts for African. However, out of seven different majors, the most preferred faculties are arts, computing and science with almost identical percentages.
To start with, students not being US citizens in arts faculty are dominated by South Americans that belong to 79 of all. In contrast, African students constitute only two which are twice as low as students from Australia do with 4. In addition to this, European students placed in second prevalence in arts faculty are fourfold higher than Asian students making up 6.
On the other hand, medicine and law faculty is slightly less preferred than engineering, by nearly 3%. Nevertheless, arts, computing and science consist of almost two-third of all enrollments in this university with the rate of 23%, 22% and 21%, respectively. In a similar manner, the percentage of business students is the fourth common profession with 14%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In a similar manner" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rate of 23%, 22% and 21%, respectively. In a similar manner, the percentage of business students is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, second, so, third, whereas, in addition, in contrast, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28795811518 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77252691826 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643979057592 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.4920527671 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.222222222 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5555555556 5.23603664747 240% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196619415581 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788620989546 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805367887195 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128270459762 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925093951856 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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