Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Changing ill-conditions is considered to be a necessity to lead a better life by some people, while others claim that accepting them as they are is the most convenient way. I will discuss in this essay which reasons affect the attitude of people. As far as I am concerned fighting against bad conditions should be done by people for the pursuit of happiness.
To begin with, people holding the idea of accepting an unsatisfactory job is the best claim that trying vigorously to turn the situation upside-down can be more devastating for job prospects. By way of example, they say, if you are an employee and have a bad principle, you cannot change the situation especially in a time when you need money. However, Other people suggest that although there are some risks of getting fired when they try to sort the problem out, the situation will be the same for the whole life unless they change these. Searching for another job while working at the same time, for example, can help to improve that.
Furthermore, money cannot buy happiness; having said that, the lack of it is more likely to cause problems such as having trouble with paying rent and shopping for your basic needs. Therefore, some people say that shortage of money is not something that we should undermine. People have to search for some money resources, by having an extra job apart from a day-to-day job in order to have good living standards, at least, for their children. On the other hand, the reason why others opt for accepting money issues is that they tend not to get away from their comfort zone. They can choose to limit their outcome instead of changing the situation. Also, these usually state that searching for money is endless, which puts strain on our lives.
In conclusion, weighing up the two arguments, I believe to put effort into changing bad situations to pleasure ones is necessary not only for our lives but also for our grandchildren.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, apart from, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77014925373 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57857581646 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576119402985 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2354553521 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.142857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259430333328 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842655346803 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509160315513 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139932352788 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590932277212 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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