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The bar chart shows the average size class in primary schools and lower secondary schools in 6 countries compared to the world average in 2006.

The bar chart illustrates the average size in class between primary schools and lower secondary schools in six different countries, compared to the world in 2006.

Overall, it can be seen that the proportion of the world in secondary school was higher than primary school. Additionally, Asian countries such as South Korea and Japan had more students than other countries.

In 2006, the proportion of pupils in primary school led the way with under 35%, which was followed by that of Japan, around 30%. Beside that, the UK accounted for 27%. On the contrary, Mexico, Denmark and Iceland were one of the lowest ranked countries, about 20%, 23% and 21%, respectively.

With the learner in secondary school, at the bottom position still Denmark and Iceland, the figure equivalent to primary schools. Along with the participation of the UK, which accounted for 18%. Japan and South Korea were still one of the top proportions. Mexico witnessed a rise and reached the point of 30%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, still, such as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06134969325 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60944701907 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625766871166 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5777137736 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370563308061 0.215688989381 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124094917517 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.204310396976 0.0843802449381 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261328101511 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.249045600893 0.0819641961636 304% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, still, such as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments