The bar chart depicts the information about in the year 2004 to 2007 various destinations are selected by the British Emigration. Such as, Australia, Spain, New Zealand, USA, France.
To begin with, Australia destinations is most popular among the people in year 2006. These destinations are selected by above 50 thousands people, it obtains the highest positions. Since, Spain also obtains the second position in 2006, nearby 34 thousands people select this place. Other destinations such as, New Zealand, USA and France not more than 25 thousands British people choose these destinations in year 2006. In the first two years, British people frequently select the Australia destination. On the other hand, New Zealand and USA destinations selected by British citizens just 25 thousand and less than 20 thousands respectively.
In 2007, people rarely choose the France destinations. Although, Australia and Spain both places famous among the British masses. In 2005, almost 35 thousand people select the France destinations and it obtains the second place in year 2005.
To conclude, people usually choose the Australia and Spain destinations rather than others. The lowest position obtain by the USA and New Zealand destinations got last second positions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46153846154 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78440288182 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507692307692 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8023667594 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9230769231 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207857010577 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925799861684 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956250540902 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15145779673 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884802423548 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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