The bar chart delineates the proportion of GDP from IT and Service industry in UK between 1992 to 2000
Overall, both IT and Service industry showed an upward trend throughout the period. IT industrial share kept ahead and grew swiftly with each passing stage despite some fluctuations. In contrast, the occupation of Service went up sequentially in the same era. The gap/distinction between the two reflected great disparity in the end.
More specifically, Percentage of GDP in IT industry was roughly 6% in 1992, being higher than Service industry rate by approximately 2%. two years later, it increased to 8%. nevertheless, the figure illustrated almost remain steady in 1996 and then the rate of IT industry began to grow significantly to 12% in 1998 and near 15% in 2000.
In comparison, service industry rate was about 4% in 1992, and it uplifted to 6% in 1994, then in 1996 it had a gently jump to around 7% and being ceaseless in next two years. Service industry was widened the gap of ratio to the IT industry in this corresponding period.in 2000, it rose to approximately 8% and being almost half of IT ratio.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Two
...vice industry rate by approximately 2%. two years later, it increased to 8%. nevert...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nevertheless
...%. two years later, it increased to 8%. nevertheless, the figure illustrated almost remain s...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('gently') instead an adjective, or a noun ('jump') instead of another adjective.
...fted to 6% in 1994, then in 1996 it had a gently jump to around 7% and being ceaseless in nex...
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Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...ndustry was widened the gap of ratio to the IT industry in this corresponding period.i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, then, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86010362694 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96113876309 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575129533679 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0927503253 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.222222222 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11343705622 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433501164155 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670784952924 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107903291115 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116131944474 0.0819641961636 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.