The bar chart shows the number of visitors to four London museums.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
The chart displays data concerning the number of visitors to the museums in London over a six-month period, from June to December. Generally, it is readily apparent that the British Museum is visited by the vast majority of visitors. In terms of overall figures, it also has the highest while the National Museum has the lowest throughout.
In June, the History, British and Science Museum had a relatively similar figure with above 400,000 while the outlier was the National Museum with only about 200,000. The figure of the History Museum underwent 2 months of stability before surging to more than 600,000 in August, after that, it plummeted and hit a low of roughly 280,000 in December. The similar pattern occurred in the British Museum with a peak at more than 700,000 in July, however, the number declined significantly by 220,000 to the end of the period.
With regards to the Science Museum, the number of visitors here plateaued in two months and then abruptly rose to 500,000 in September but finally fell to its nadir of 300,000 at the end of the year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87431693989 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48965730621 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6347686213 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.428571429 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120903042772 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657090731144 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492168773627 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095405783758 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428187164021 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.