The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over 4 different seasons.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart compares points scored by three different teams in four different seasons for the years 2002 to 2005.
Overall,team B remained the highest scorer,despite their decrease in points whilst team C and team A had few significant changes in their scores over the given period .
For the year 2002,team A scored 5 points and team C scored double of team A at 10 points while team B were the highest at 82 points.Whereas in 2003 ,the points increased for team A by almost double at 11 and by one half for team C at 15 points.Team B were at 60 points ,the highest of all teams.
Moreover,for year 2004 ,team A points increased thrice at 35 points making it relatively closer to team B which is at 45 points .Team C score decreased by 3 points.While ,in year 2005 both team A and C scored lowest with 8 and 5 points respectively.Team B remained at the top with a score of 55 points ;an increase of 7 points when compared to year 2004.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , team
... the years 2002 to 2005. Overall,team B remained the highest scorer,despite t...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , despite
...erall,team B remained the highest scorer,despite their decrease in points whilst team C ...
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Suggestion: .
...es in their scores over the given period . For the year 2002,team A scored...
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Suggestion: Whereas
...le team B were the highest at 82 points.Whereas in 2003 ,the points increased for team ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the highest at 82 points.Whereas in 2003 ,the points increased for team A by almos...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uble at 11 and by one half for team C at 15 points.Team B were at 60 points ,the ...
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Suggestion: Team
...nd by one half for team C at 15 points.Team B were at 60 points ,the highest of all...
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Suggestion: ,
...C at 15 points.Team B were at 60 points ,the highest of all teams. Moreov...
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...e highest of all teams. Moreover,for year 2004 ,team A points increased thri...
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...ll teams. Moreover,for year 2004 ,team A points increased thrice at 35 poi...
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Line 19, column 30, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A point' or simply 'points'?
Suggestion: A point; Points
...s. Moreover,for year 2004 ,team A points increased thrice at 35 points making it...
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Line 19, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...y closer to team B which is at 45 points .Team C score decreased by 3 points.While...
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Suggestion: Team
...closer to team B which is at 45 points .Team C score decreased by 3 points.While ,in...
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...nts .Team C score decreased by 3 points.While ,in year 2005 both team A and C scored ...
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...Team C score decreased by 3 points.While ,in year 2005 both team A and C scored lo...
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Suggestion: Team
...lowest with 8 and 5 points respectively.Team B remained at the top with a score of 5...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at the top with a score of 55 points ;an increase of 7 points when compared to ye...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49714285714 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87443850068 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537142857143 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.1782199877 43.030603864 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.75 112.824112599 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.75 22.9334400587 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192337362803 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145506908564 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271143209563 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145506908564 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271143209563 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.2329268293 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.71 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.0658536585 199% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.