The bar chart shows the scores of teams A B and C over four different seasons

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The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

The chart compares the points scored by three different teams over a four-year period from 2002 to 2005.

Overall, it is clear that there was a fluctuation in the scores of all the teams during shown. Also, the points scored by team B were much higher than the scores of the other teams.

In 2002, team B achieved its highest total, 82 points. In contrast, the figures for team A and team C were lower the scores of team B, which were 5 and 10 points, respectively. The period between 2002 and 2004 saw a dramatic increase in the scores of team A, reaching a peak of 35 points in 2004. The totals of team C remained relatively stable at between 10 and 15 points, because the scores of team B fell steadily from their peak in 2002 to a low figure of 43 points in 2004.

There was then a rise in the team B score to 55 points in 2005. On the other hand, team A saw a fall in its score to 8 points, slightly higher than team C with 5 points.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 103, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...rast, the figures for team A and team C were lower the scores of team B, which were ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15675675676 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2473358954 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497297297297 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0238014308 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4444444444 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303959012558 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152718570461 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839251323574 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22771460539 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837693643252 0.0819641961636 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.48 61.2550243902 153% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.85 11.4140731707 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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