The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over 4 different seasons.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.

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The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over 4 different seasons.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart compares points scored by three different teams in four different seasons for the years 2002 to 2005.

Overall, team B remained the highest scorer, despite their decrease in points whilst team C and team A had few significant changes in their scores over the given period.

For the year 2002, team A scored 5 points and team C scored double of team A at 10 points while team B were the highest at 82 points. Whereas in 2003, the points increased for team A by almost double at 11 and by one half for team C at 15 points.Team B were at 60 points, the highest of all teams.

Moreover,for year 2004, team A points increased thrice at 35 making it relatively closer to team B which is at 45 points. Team C score decreased by 3 points. While, in year 2005 both team A and C scored lowest with 8 and 5 points respectively. Team B remained at the top with a score of 55 points; an increase of 7 points when compared to year 2004.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Team
...and by one half for team C at 15 points.Team B were at 60 points, the highest of all...
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Line 19, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...e highest of all teams. Moreover,for year 2004, team A points increased thri...
^^^^
Line 19, column 30, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A point' or simply 'points'?
Suggestion: A point; Points
...s. Moreover,for year 2004, team A points increased thrice at 35 making it relati...
^^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at the top with a score of 55 points; an increase of 7 points when compared to ye...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33888888889 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47832579889 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516666666667 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.24126458 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.625 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204162165367 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124803661721 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356642449827 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150525141012 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261660449407 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.44 61.2550243902 149% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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