The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart represents how citizens of various age groups utilized news sources in an unnamed country in 2011.
In general, radio was the most popular form of news media for all ages, except for those between 10 and 17. Moreover, it is worth noticing that micro blogging and social networks were more common among people of younger ages.
As revealed in the chart, the categories of kids and teenagers (10 to 17) and young adults (18 to 29) saw a similar proportions of social network usage with 80 percent. However, only 20 percent of those under 17 accessed news from radio while that figure for those under 19 was slightly higher with 25 percent. Most notably, standing at around 94 percent, the percentage of micro blogging users among young adults was over twice as much as that among children and teenagers which remained at 40 percent.
It should be noticed that the popularity of social networks gradually decreased as the surveyed population got older with the proportions for people under 50, under 65 and over 65 being 46 percent, 32 percent and 10 percent respectively. The same pattern could be seen in the utilization of micro blogging as the figures declined from 15 percent among residents between 30 and 49 to just about 3 percent among senior citizens. Meanwhile, radio managed to maintain its powerful position since the quantities of usage among the three older groups all exceeded 80 percent.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'proportion'?
Suggestion: proportion
...and young adults 18 to 29 saw a similar proportions of social network usage with 80 percent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, while, except for, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87966804979 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48924616734 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589211618257 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1261233852 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.666666667 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7777777778 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0716302189834 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417370768785 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064360429261 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776711751989 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831481523511 0.0819641961636 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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