The bar charts below show the marriage and divorce statistics for eight countries in 1981 and 1994.
A glimpse at the two bar charts given reveals the information of marriage and divorce proportion of eight countries in 1981 and 1994. Overall, USA surpassed all other countries in terms of both marriage and divorce rates in both years recorded.
It is evident that from the first bar chart that United States had the highest marriage rates in 1981, with over 10 per thousand people getting married. The data, yet, slipped slightly to become 9 per thousand 13 years later. Most of the other countries listed had their marriage rate decreased from about 6 to 7 per thousand to 4 to 6 per thousand except Japan, which maintained almost identical marriage rate in both years. Lastly, the only country which witnessed a significant increase of marriage rate was Denmark. Numbering at 0.5%, its marriage rate raised by 0.2% to reach 0.7% in 1994, becoming the country with second highest rate of marriage.
As of divorce rate, United States still had more people getting divorced than any countries else listed in the chart. Although a gentle fall was recorded, the rate of divorce still stood at a high of 0.4% in 1994. Denmark shared the same trend as the U.S. and recorded a negligible fall from 1981 to 1994. It is also interesting to note that while number of people getting divorced increased slightly in UK, Japan, Finland, France and Italy, number of divorced German kept the same rate at 0.2% in both years. In addition, the country with smallest divorce rate was Italy, which was a mere one fifth of that of the United States.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 536, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the smallest'.
Suggestion: with the smallest
...in both years. In addition, the country with smallest divorce rate was Italy, which was a mer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, second, so, still, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 266.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3763591759 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511278195489 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3773588359 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.083333333 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278241283164 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124199974229 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100545068977 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235394431865 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932055684016 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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