The tables show the sales of fair-priced coffee from developing countries and bananas in Switzerland, UK, Belgium, Sweden and Denmark in the years 1999 and 2004.
Overall, the sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas have shown a dramatic increase in all five European countries over the period. Meanwhile the sale of bananas has suffered a slight decrease in Sweden and Denmark.
It is observed that the sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee has sky-rocketed in the UK, from 1.5 millions of euros in 1999 to a surprising 20 millions of euros in 2004. Similarly, the sales has nearly doubled in Belgium and Sweden where they were 1 and 0.8 millions of euros respectively in 1999. A similar trend was observed in Switzerland and Denmark where the sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee showed a significant increase from 3 and 1.8 millions of euros to 6 and 2 millions of euros over the period.
In addition to this, in Switzerland, the sale of bananas has leaped from 15 million euros in 1999 to 47 million euros in 2004. Likewise, greater increase in sales of bananas was seen in UK and Belgium where it rose from a mere 1 and 0.6 to 5.5 and 4 millions of euros respectively. On the contrary, Sweden and Denmark have suffered the greatest decline in sales of bananas from 1.8 and 2 to a mere 1 and 0.9 millions of dollars respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...ive European countries over the period. Meanwhile the sale of bananas has suffered a slig...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...ffee has sky-rocketed in the UK, from 1.5 millions of euros in 1999 to a surprising 20 millio...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '20 million'.
Suggestion: 20 million
...llions of euros in 1999 to a surprising 20 millions of euros in 2004. Similarly, the sales has...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '8 million'.
Suggestion: 8 million
...gium and Sweden where they were 1 and 0.8 millions of euros respectively in 1999. A similar t...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '8 million'.
Suggestion: 8 million
...wed a significant increase from 3 and 1.8 millions of euros to 6 and 2 millions of euros over...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '2 million'.
Suggestion: 2 million
...om 3 and 1.8 millions of euros to 6 and 2 millions of euros over the period. In addition t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gium where it rose from a mere 1 and 0.6 to 5.5 and 4 millions of euros respectiv...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '4 million'.
Suggestion: 4 million
... rose from a mere 1 and 0.6 to 5.5 and 4 millions of euros respectively. On the contrary, Sw...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '9 million'.
Suggestion: 9 million
...ananas from 1.8 and 2 to a mere 1 and 0.9 millions of dollars respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, similarly, while, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7974137931 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10172066378 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.405172413793 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7711857778 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22184145376 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123831392754 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696242493643 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180531093799 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619954795692 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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