The pie chart demonstrates the causes of worldwide land degradation in percent and the table explains how theses causes affected 3 different regions of the world during 1990s.
As the pie chart shows, the major causes of worldwide land degradation are 3 important reason of over-grazing, over-cultivation, and deforestation with approximately one third each.(35%,28%,and30% respectively)
Only 7% of loosing land in the world was due to other factors.
Between the 3 region of north America, Europe, and Oceania, the total land that was lost was highest in Europe with 23% and North America the lowest with 5% degradation.
Overgrazing was the most important cause of land loss in Oceania with 11.3% from total of 13%.
Defrostation was the number one reason of land degradation in Europe with 9.8% followed by overcultivation with 7.7% and overgrazing with 5.5%.
By contrast, In north america only 0.2% of land loss was due to deforestation and the high cultivation includes more than half of the causes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'during the 1990s'.
Suggestion: during the 1990s
...fected 3 different regions of the world during 1990s. As the pie chart shows, the major cau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24074074074 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28718048722 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.2576159529 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.5 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357513172107 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193131125587 0.103423049105 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133775301349 0.0843802449381 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176568566308 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125207061734 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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