the chart below compares the percentage of self employed workers in 5 nations from 1998 to 2008
The bar chart gives information about the self employed workers rate in 5 different countries between 1998 and 2008
Overall, it is apparent that the majority of people working in Turkey and Grece are self-employed, as opposed to the remaining nations. While the figures in all countries were seen with increases, Grece and Turkey followed an inverse trend
In 1998, more than half of workers in Turkey are self-employed, which was also the highest percentage of around 55% out of the total workforce. Followed by Grece, with the figures staying at around 43%. However, 10 years later, the gap between these countries was narrowed down to a mere 3% as there was around 48% and 35% self employed workers in Turkey and Grece, respectively
The Czech Republic saw a slight increase in the proportion of their self employed workers, from approximately 11% to 14%. Moreover, people who worked by themselves in the Russian Republic and Slovakia just accounted for no more than 10% of the total labor market, except for the figure from Slovakia in 2008, which was roughly as same as that from the Czech Republic in 1998
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91534391534 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62965624421 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.8417557068 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.8 112.824112599 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8 22.9334400587 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261232747541 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130116130317 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083758853868 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166127915157 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104310380094 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.2329268293 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 61.2550243902 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.