The chart below give information about the amount and type of water in the world, and also tell the use of water in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The given Pie charts depicts the quantity and sorts of water in world and the column graph illustrates the proportion of water used for three different countries namely - Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada.
Overall, it is clear from the graph that availability of fresh water is very low from total world water. While, majority of fresh water found as frozen water. In total, Canada is used the most proportion of water among given countries.
From the first pie chart, saline water covered the most of part of total water with 97.50% and remaining (2.5%) is fresh water. The second pie chart shows that a little over two third (69.80%) fresh water available in frozen format such as glaciers and permanent snows, Whereas fresh underground water shared just more than a quarter (29.90%). Underground ice is found only around 1% merely.
From column chart, the rate of water used in agriculture is the highest in Saudi Arabia, which accounts for a half. Hence, other two sectors, Domestic and Industry have only around 7% and nearly 18% of water respectively. Followed by Egypt, 40 per cent of water goes for agriculture purpose, comparing with domestic use and industrial use which make up approximately 9 per cent. However, industrial purpose, almost 45%, dominates agriculture in Canada, which constitutes 30 percentage. The fraction of water used in domestic is almost half, around 20 percentage, compare with industrial sector.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, second, so, third, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11538461538 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56288938346 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0243703569 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227303553259 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098324540028 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569242154277 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16090032516 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034860772621 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.