The bar chart illustrates the current export revenues of Southland's three major exports and a prediction of the export for 2025. It can be observed from the graph that products like Dairy have registered a sudden growth while other major products follow a steady trend.
International tourism remains a major exporter for Southland by displaying a steady increase in revenue from about 8 billion dollars by one billion in 2018. The future prediction is inline with the current trend. Compared to this, meat exports seem to face downwards with exports showing a decrease of half billion dollars. Also, the exports predicted for meat in 2025 is expected to be lesser than its figures in 2018.
One surprising development however, is the meteoric rise in Southland's dairy exports. The exports revenue from Dairy products had crossed that of Tourism and by 2018, Diary products has emerged as the major exporter for Southland. But the future predictions indicate that Tourism shall regain its top position as dairy is expected to decrease in its overall exports by 2025.
To conclude, the share of three major exporters in Southland's exports displayed a shift from Tourism to Dairy products but the predictions for 2025 indicate that Tourism shall again become the top exporter. On the other hand, Meat products shall continue to constitute lesser percentage of the main exports for Southland.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'exports'' or 'export's'?
Suggestion: exports'; export's
...c rise in Southlands dairy exports. The exports revenue from Dairy products had crossed...
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Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ee major exporters in Southlands exports displayed a shift from Tourism to Dairy ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19026548673 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6279200258 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491150442478 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5529581033 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.636363636 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24500542123 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113390230729 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691112375429 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174432773761 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151063399276 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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