The chart below illustrates the percentages of sales of one bookseller in 1970, 1997 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts demonstrate data on book sales of various categories in a bookseller in the years 1972, 1992, and 2012.
Overall, it can be seen that there was an increase in the proportion of sales of adult fiction and children's fiction, while people spent less money on biography books, travel, and others. In addition, people showed more interest in adult fiction than other genres at the end of the period.
In 1972, adult fiction accounted for 20% of the total book sales, while children's fiction and biography shared the same figure. In 1992, the sales of adult fiction and children's fiction experienced a slight increase to 25% and 22%, respectively. Meanwhile, the figure for biography showed a modest decrease of 5% in the same time frame. Moreover, adult fiction became by far the most popular type at the expense of other genres, accounting for 45% of the total book sales. Besides, children's fiction only showed a slight rise to 25% of the total book sales, compared to biography, which was only 8% at the end of the period.
In terms of travel and others, the travel genre made up 12% of the total book sales in 1972, then witnessing a modest increase to 18% before declining by 8% in 2012. The figure for others accounted for a quarter of the chart in 1972, before dropping significantly to only 12% in 2012.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71982758621 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50174953646 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474137931034 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9980356454 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0585900836515 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030906326071 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433261210378 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604295809639 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537386327221 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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