The chart below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate the number of honey-bee colonies how much honey produced in the United States between 1970 and 2010. Units are measured in millions and tonnes for colonies' figures and the amounts of honey, respectively.
Overall, the US bee colonies as well as honey production plunged during the mentioned decades. However, there was an exceptional case in 1980 when the greatest bee colonies is patent whereas the bees' production was less than adjacent years. All in all, it shows a downward trend during those years.
In 1970, there were 4 millions bee colonies in the US which surged to 4.2 approximately, in 1980. After this increase, the number of colonies went down to 3.5 and 2.6 in 1990 and 2000, respectively. Eventually, this amount dropped to nearly 1.8 which plummeted substantially in comparison 40 years ago.
During the same period, the honey which was made in 1970 (130,000 tonnes) dipped to 110,000 in 1980. Although there was an increase to reach 120,000 in 1990, but the honey production had a steep decline by depicting of 100,000 and solely 70,000 in 2000 and 2010, respectively. In other words, the United States experienced a dramatic drop for produced honey to hit the lowest point in 2010.
- According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it. Unlike tourist in the 1960s and 70s, they return home with no experience of the local culture.Why do you think this happen? 78
- The chart below show information about honey bee colonies and honey production in the US Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 64
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'bees'' or 'bee's'?
Suggestion: bees'; bee's
...test bee colonies is patent whereas the bees production was less than adjacent years...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, well, whereas, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9854368932 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67123091421 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597087378641 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0860791445 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3636363636 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223004415899 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910373530286 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637857170929 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140042718541 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530204197866 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.