The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and
women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown
below.
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The chart below depicts that amount of free time enjoyed by men and women of different job status between 1998 to 1990.However,either employer full or part-time or unemployed.In this essay we will discuss the total number of leisure hours of both the sexes.
Although,the time for men as spending free is highier as compare to women.Perhaps,the highest number of hours for men ,who are wether unemployed or retired almost eighty hours in week.On the other hand women highest free timing is greatest in unemployment and retirement approximately seventy hours still lower than that of mens.
however, the part-time employment and house wives in these two type men not evenly involved.parttime time jobs female having forty hours to spend.But in housewives have free time of fifty hours in week.
In full-time employed the rate of leisure is higher for men with respect to feminine about forty-five hours for males and thirty seven hours for womens.
As a whole number of males time to spend free is higher than that of women.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
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... job status between 1998 to 1990.However,either employer full or part-time or unemploye...
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...mployer full or part-time or unemployed.In this essay we will discuss the total nu...
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...isure hours of both the sexes. Although,the time for men as spending free is highie...
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... or retired almost eighty hours in week.On the other hand women highest free timin...
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... eighty hours in week.On the other hand women highest free timing is greatest in unemployment...
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...jobs female having forty hours to spend.But in housewives have free time of fifty h...
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...t to feminine about forty-five hours for males and thirty seven hours for womens....
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...ales and thirty seven hours for womens. As a whole number of males time to spend f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, still, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04705882353 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95256618195 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605882352941 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.8064513732 43.030603864 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.6 112.824112599 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 5.23603664747 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200519162012 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12072533606 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688353720103 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12072533606 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688353720103 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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