The chart below shows the average cost of monthly contract for four different mobile (cell phones) in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro.
The line graph illustrates the average building costs in 3 nations from 1997 to 2014.
Overall, the cost of building in 3 countries rose significantly throughout the period. While country A had the fastest growth rate.
From the graph below, it can be seen that in 1997, real estate costs started at 125K, 130K, and 135K, respectively, for all 3 countries C, B, and A. In the 6 following years, the house expenses for country A went up strongly to over 500k. There was a negligible decline at 480k before the massive increase reached 550k in 2014.
By 2005, the expenses of housing for country B grew gradually to roughly 300k. Afterward, it fell to just above 250k in 2008 with an escalation to just under 500k at the end of the period. the costs of country C increased steadily until 2007 but there was a slight decrease and fell near the original number and it recovered to just over 250k in 2014.
- The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country in different days
- Demand for food is increasing worldwide What are the causes of this What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough 73
- The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 56
- Some people think that cars should be banned from large cities 56
- Some people think that young people should follow the traditions of the society Others think young people are free to behave as individuals Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ng costs in 3 nations from 1997 to 2014. Overall, the cost of building in 3 count...
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...se significantly throughout the period. While country A had the fastest growth rate. ...
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...e country A had the fastest growth rate. From the graph below, it can be seen tha...
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...e massive increase reached 550k in 2014. By 2005, the expenses of housing for cou...
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...st under 500k at the end of the period. the costs of country C increased steadily u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63190184049 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56234689085 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625766871166 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.9476143899 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.833333333 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15731634343 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766727774522 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505135929145 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100477088405 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024624404787 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.91 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.