The depicted bar graph illustrates ‘food and drink’, ‘restaurant and hotel’ and ‘entertainment’ as three categories in which UK dwellers, among four different age classifications, disbursed in 2004.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the UK residents’ expenditure precedence changed with age. ‘Food and drink’ and ‘entertainment’ were accounted as the highest spending priorities among senior citizens, while the demand for restaurant and hotel decreased significantly.
The UK under-31-aged dwellers spent approximately 14 % of their spending budget on ‘restaurant and hotel’, while this figure for individuals between 31 to 60 years of age was estimated to be roughly 12 %. This is in contrast to the citizens whom aged between 61 to 75 years, residents in this category preferred to spend least amount of money, only 2%, on ‘restaurant and hotel’, however the great proportion of their total spending dedicated to ‘entertainment’ and ‘food and drink’, 23% and 20% respectively.
In addition, the over-76-aged-senior citizens allocated over 22% of their expense budget on edible stuffs, while they were less interested in restaurant by spending only 7% of their expenditure allocation. Spending Priorities of people aged 31 to 45 seemed quite the same with the individuals between 46 to 60 years of age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spend the least'.
Suggestion: spend the least
...residents in this category preferred to spend least amount of money, only 2%, on ‘restauran...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, well, while, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67156862745 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68166361823 2.65546596893 139% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.218059638 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.285714286 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1428571429 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157460017443 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839324662752 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699687164192 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113704554473 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604375998925 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.2 11.4140731707 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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