The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different groups in residence in the UK in 2004.
The given column graph compares the five different age group expenditure in three various types like food and drink, restaurants and hotel and entertainment in United kingdom in the year 2004.
Overall, the two age groups were in the same positions but various sections. Majority of people like and dislike their age groups like a young person ( under 30 years) are consuming on the hotel and diner. It was the highest percentage (14%) in that particular category.
And another age group 61 to 75 age-old people did not spend on the that. They love the food and drink both ages groups 61 to 75 and above 76 years old are expending on the eats and beverage. The first group was at 20% which was the second-highest and the above 76-year-old was the first group which course the 20% it maximum percentage in thise sector.
After all, human beings love consuming on the fun the 61 to 75 age group was spend maximum on the entertainment. It also most close to 25%. And another age group not interested in thise sector. Under 30-year-old people was spending only 7% and the 46 to 66 age group and above 76 years old committee almost on a similar track.
I conclude that all age groups were their own choice, as the young generation like to go bistro and motel. Older people love to eat food and drink beverage. I deem that it needs to be the face of change, there is no age limit to do something.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ike their age groups like a young person under 30 years are consuming on the hote...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51778656126 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44698191183 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513833992095 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4010594652 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6428571429 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106712413478 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412196442419 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045087205828 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766536623462 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558983619514 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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