This chart below shows figures for attendance at hospital emergency care departments in Northern Ireland by age group in December 2016 and December 2017.
In this graph view, under 5 ages about 50000 children attended to emergency care was helped for children about 52000 in this county in 2016 and 2017. But second performance showing 5-15 ages children. It was less than under 5 ages and around 21000 children emergency help to took in these years. The third performance is 16-44 age information and it was more than teenagers' numbers and it was about 30000 people. The next performance is 45-64 ages and it nearly the same with 16-44 ages. The following information is 65-74 ages attended about 30000 these years. Finally, the most number in this chart is 75 overages people and it was about 65000.
Young children and the elderly have got involved in attendance at hospital emergency care in time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, second, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 623.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 129.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82945736434 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38522987471 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565891472868 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 176.4 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4865648157 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.875 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215108638276 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978433206905 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680894937778 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180554886217 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00496520096739 0.0819641961636 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 40.7170731707 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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