The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is a graph depicting the American families' yearly income in three years: 2007, 2011 and 2015.
From an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that in 2007 and 2015, the number of household in US earning more than 100000$ was the highest among those five types of income. Additionally, in the year 2011, most families gained from 25000 dollars to 50000 dollars per year.
Considering the bar graph more closely, we can obtain that in all three aforementioned years, the data of households that had annual income of 75000$ to 100000$ were ranked last with no more than 15 millions. Besides, the second least common type of income is the group of 50 thousand dollars to 75 thousand dollars, which was approximately 20 millions families in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
It is also worth noting that the gap between three remain groups was lessened. The number of families having the annual salary of less than 25000$ was nearly the same as that of 25000 to 50000 dollars a year, which ranged from 25 to 30 millions in all 3 years. Moreover, in 2007 and 2015, the figure for more than 100000$ income was the largest among those five categories with 30 millions and 34 millions respectively. However, in 2011, this data was a bit lower than the number of households having an annual income of less than 25000 and 25000-50000$ to be 27 millions in that year.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
...er of household in US earning more than 100000$ was the highest among those five types ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$75000'.
Suggestion: $75000
...of households that had annual income of 75000$ to 100000$ were ranked last with no mor...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
...lds that had annual income of 75000$ to 100000$ were ranked last with no more than 15 m...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25000'.
Suggestion: $25000
...s having the annual salary of less than 25000$ was nearly the same as that of 25000 to...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 314, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
...2007 and 2015, the figure for more than 100000$ income was the largest among those five...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70588235294 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48163937788 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516806722689 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0420408897 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.444444444 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158094558618 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076842543841 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455433739919 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117702068816 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015247937021 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
...er of household in US earning more than 100000$ was the highest among those five types ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$75000'.
Suggestion: $75000
...of households that had annual income of 75000$ to 100000$ were ranked last with no mor...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
...lds that had annual income of 75000$ to 100000$ were ranked last with no more than 15 m...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25000'.
Suggestion: $25000
...s having the annual salary of less than 25000$ was nearly the same as that of 25000 to...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 314, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
...2007 and 2015, the figure for more than 100000$ income was the largest among those five...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70588235294 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48163937788 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516806722689 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0420408897 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.444444444 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158094558618 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076842543841 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455433739919 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117702068816 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015247937021 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.