The graph shows by sex for education study in Britain between full-time and part-time education in three periods.
As can find a huge increasing from female in full-time education to reach 1200,000 female in 1990/91 after that was 690,000 female in 1970/71.
But in the other side we can find decreasing in number of full-time education from men side, as that was 1000,000 male in 1970/71 and by 1990/91 lowered to be 900,000 male.
Also that we can clearly find increasing from both in short-time education, as started with 100,000 male/ almost female and by 1990/91 crossed 200,000, that counted as a huge change in education style.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... 1990/91 lowered to be 900,000 male. Also that we can clearly find increasing fro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 537.0 965.302439024 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 107.0 196.424390244 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01869158879 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2162214527 3.73543355544 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53768866167 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 64.0 106.607317073 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598130841121 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 145.8 283.868780488 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8709598278 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.25 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172910729237 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134849239073 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101612831208 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134849239073 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101612831208 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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