The chart below shows the percentage of Australian people who were born in different places of the world.
The graph illustrates the percentages of Australians born in other countries between 1976 and 2011.
In general, the percentage of Australian people who were born abroad fluctuated significantly over the measured period. Additionally, while the percentage of Australians born in Asia rose over the period, the percentage born in the UK declined steadily.
In 1976, the percentage of UK born Australians was about 14%, which was almost three times higher than the figure of those born in Asia. Over the following 15 years, the percentage of Australians born in the UK fell to 5%, while those born in Asia rose steadily to around 15%. Meanwhile, the figures for Australians born in other regions fluctuated significantly over the period, however rose overall to around 13% in 2011.Figures for all Australians born abroad fluctuated over the 35 year period beginning at around 29% in 1976, decreasing to around 23% during the late eighties and early nineties, whilst increasing back up to around 32% by 2011.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Figures
...ever rose overall to around 13% in 2011.Figures for all Australians born abroad fluctua...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20858895706 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94723824216 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515337423313 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.9617603582 43.030603864 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.5 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252710615701 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17495152696 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763408390876 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211785881958 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795520689678 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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