The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The bar chart compares households in term of buying or renting accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. Overall, the percentage households in owed accommodation increased consistently while there was a gradual decline in the rented houses over the period 93 years. But there was a year that have the same figure in both ways.

In the first year, the proportion of houses being rented was highest, at around 86%. By contrast, the rate for owed houses was at the lowest point of nearly 25%. Then, there were a gradual rise in the percentage of households in owned accommodation and remained steadily about 32% between 1939 and 1953. After that, it reached the peak at exactly 50% in 1971. In contrast, the figure for rented house fall steadily and it also stayed stable around 70% in the next period. In 1971, it decreased to equal figure with owed houses.

From 1981 to 2011, the percentage of families owing house accommodation went up continuously and peaked at nearly 70% before a decline of about 5 % in the last year. The figure for rented houses hit a lowest point in 2001, falling to 32% , followed by a small rise of 5%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... year. The figure for rented houses hit a lowest point in 2001, falling to 32% , ...
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Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t a lowest point in 2001, falling to 32% , followed by a small rise of 5%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, then, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70646766169 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58858441034 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557213930348 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5164985579 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256654152236 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957060866209 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130986846209 0.0843802449381 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189539608778 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110438356887 0.0819641961636 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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