The given graph shows the information about the proportion of household in owned and rented home in two country England and Wales during year 1982 2011.
S can be from graphs in that,in year 1918, people had lived in own house, it was nearly 25%,when that was more decrease approximately by 40% in same year as compared to people lived in rent home. In addition, almost 68 % preferred to live in rent house by both countries ,which was increased almost by 36% than own. Moreover, all masses had been living in own and rent home in year 1961, however it was approximately 40% and 58% respectively.
According to the, same number of lived in both category own and rent home through England's and Wales's person, which was 50% respectively. Apart from the, feature of people lived in own accommodation, however, it was more than 70%.
Overall, it can be seen that, people had more choosed to live in rent house, then that was slight decreased from year 1939 to 2011 as well rapid increased ratio of people lived in oven house during year 1982 to 2011.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...1982 2011. S can be from graphs in that,in year 1918, people had lived in own hous...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... to live in rent house by both countries ,which was increased almost by 36% than o...
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Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
...% and 58% respectively. According to the, same number of lived in both category o...
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Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
... which was 50% respectively. Apart from the, feature of people lived in own accommod...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66129032258 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48144476702 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543010752688 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4101421903 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.857142857 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139796184575 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863417031166 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664601945508 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116741665837 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768216124313 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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