The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1981 and 2011.
Given was the bar chart providing data regarding to the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Generally speaking, it could be observed that, from 1918 to 2011, the data of households which owning accommodation emerged as upward trends whereas the households which renting accommodation emerged as downward trends.
To begin with, in 1918, the number of households rented accommodation stood at 77% the fell to 68% in 1939 subsequently the number of renting accommodation remained constant in the 14 following years. Afterward, in the next 48 years, it plunged to about 31% in 2001 even though it rose again at 36% in the end of the year.
On the other hand, households in England and Wales which owning accommodation stood about 23% in 1918. This number rose in 1939 about 32%but remained constant in the next 4 years. After that, the number of owning accommodation increased gradually till 2001 which peaked about 69% though this number dropped again in 2011 about 64%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, whereas, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05813953488 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81191065576 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517441860465 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6166666071 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.285714286 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335088456515 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174272146071 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164811155075 0.0843802449381 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248820626473 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156370498433 0.0819641961636 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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