The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates clear picture of households in owned and rented accommodation in england and wales between 1918 to 2011.

In 1918, households owned percentage is 23% in england and wales. but these percentage owning is gradually increased in coming years up to 2011. 69% is increased but from 2001 to 2011, owning households is bit dropped from 69 percentage to 65 percentage nearly 4 percentage of owning house is dipped.

In 1918 both the cities rented accommodation was very high percentage up to 78 percentage. In the same time next following years the value of rented house started to dipped down up to 2001. In comparision two cities owning and rental house holds were same percentage in the year of 1971. In 2011 we can see slight increase of rental accomodation up to 35 percentage.

Finally in a clear picture from 1918 to 2001 owning the accommodation percentage is increased in the same time household rented accommodation percentage is decreased but in the 2011 owning residency percentage slightly dipper renting accomodating percentage is slightly increased.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...percentage is 23% in england and wales. but these percentage owning is gradually in...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this percentage' or 'these percentages'?
Suggestion: this percentage; these percentages
...entage is 23% in england and wales. but these percentage owning is gradually increased in coming...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...from 2001 to 2011, owning households is bit dropped from 69 percentage to 65 percen...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ouse started to dipped down up to 2001. In comparision two cities owning and renta...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...re same percentage in the year of 1971. In 2011 we can see slight increase of rent...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...al accomodation up to 35 percentage. Finally in a clear picture from 1918 to 2001 ow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03738755191 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477272727273 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.6349407477 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320332797258 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165378542996 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120986568499 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257137834849 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109090423554 0.0819641961636 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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