The chart below shows the percentage of households in rented and owned accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
The graph illustrates the proportion of families in rented and purchased apartments in the two biggest countries of Great Britain over the 93 years since 1918.
Overall, the amount of rented accommodation has a gradual fell, while trend on private property has slightly rose.
According to the statistic, the popularity of rented housing in the period for 1918 to 1971 reduced from about 80% to 50%. On the other hand for that period the sales of habitation have climbed to the same number but from about 20%. It is following that in the period from 1971 to 2011, both trends were continuing their course and by 2011 their directions dramatically changed. The household in owned accommodation began to decrease. In 2001 it was about 70, and it had an upward trend to 65. The rented housing in 2001 was about 30, then rose to half of forty by 2011.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
... trend on private property has slightly rose. According to the statistic, the popu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73154362416 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58355266656 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61744966443 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1446745732 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.125 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17208135421 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080040854358 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692488812128 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100324932446 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286768022341 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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