The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate at least five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2002 to 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate at least five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2002 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar chart sheds lights on the percentage of British residents whose consumption of fruits and vegetables are greater than five portions a day during the 2002-2010 period.

As can be seen from the graph, the consumptions of adults is nearly double that of children, and female adults eat slightly more fruits and vegetables than male. What is noticeable is 2006 is the year with the highest veggies consumption in terms of all three mentioned categories.

Considering the data for women, a quarter of women in the UK ate at least five portions of fruits and vegetables everyday in 2002. Four years laters, in 2006, it then rose to 32% - the highest figure recognized in the whole chart before ending the period with a minimal drop to 27% in 2010.

At the same time, the data for male and children followed the same pattern as female. The proportion for men stood at 22%; 28% and 24% in 2002, 2006 and 2010 respectively, slightly lower than that of female from 3-5%. On the other hand, not many kids having more than five portions of veggies a day, its figures only account for 11% (2002), 16% (2006), and 14%(2010).


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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'veggies'' or 'veggie's'?
Suggestion: veggies'; veggie's
...le is 2006 is the year with the highest veggies consumption in terms of all three menti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, at least, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70707070707 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48890368425 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5564760991 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236936644522 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102948338738 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851720504264 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151360484714 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688139120701 0.0819641961636 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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